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It's definitely vocal, and seems inspired in part by baroque music. You have these very long runs that I could not sing in one breath (granted, I'm still getting over horrible sinusitis, so I might not be accurate) - so you might want to mark in where the singer should breathe.
Harmonically it's very nice. I'm assuming you're going to want a fair amount of rubato when those huge rolled chords hit, because it's going to take a bit longer for a live pianist to play (I'm sure you know that).
Please separate the hands in that section where you have the cluster-chords in the treble line, just for ease of reading.
When will you have a live performance?
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