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Very Nice. I really liked it. You have very good emotional transitions in the music. The vocals are also written very well to help convey the text. Great job! The only criticism I have is sometimes, you seem to emphasis a word that is not as important as others in the sentence. For example, sometimes words like "is, the, of" etc. seem to get the biggest emphasis. The only other advice is maybe have your vibraphone go to other mallet instruments for different timbres/character personifications via instrumentation. If this is possible, of course, for a performance.
Keep in mind, this is very minor. In the end, the music kept me as the listener interested and it was well executed! Great job.
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Gosh Darn E Minor!
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