wow, i am amazed! i thought i left a score and u took parts, but i didnt! that's very a good job, well the melody is easy too. i'm impressed
yeah, just now, thanks to you i noticed those parallel octaves, and thanks to provide me those nice resolutions!
but hmm didn't you do just the same as me?? hehe in your example you have above my melody in the 3rd bar and ur new bass line... the last 2 beats of the mass line D E move in the same way and on the first beat of the melody, which does D E too :p
anyway thank you very much for listening to my works!
btw i really loved your sinfonia... id just say that maybe it is too fast played, you should slower a bit the time... like instead of let's say 140... go for 132 or 130. will sound more naturally allegro, than that...