"First Good THing Ive Wrote.gp5"
First Good Thing I've
Written*
Sorry, had to bring that up.
Anyways... I won't say it is bad, but it needs context. Sounds like it is depicting some sort of chaos. Build on it. Write more stuff to fit around it and then ask if it fits. Next time don't post anything in these forums unless you have a complete composition. You can post all the fragments you wish such as the one here here:
Incomplete Works; Writer's Block and Suggestions - Young Composers Music Forum
Whoa... grammatically correct usage of the word "here" twice consecutively.
