tenor10,
greets!
And I'll comment on your music!
1) I loved the motive using (how are these called in english, HELP!) 5-something tuplets. Very-very fresh and interesting.
2) The quartal harmony used throughtout the piece is delicious. But you tend to overdo it, using the same voicings again and again. Perhaps some inversions of the chord might help solve the monotony.
3) The part from 21-28 was very nice and interesting.
Cheers!