i see, well, using gradus ad parnassum of Fux, that is said that even if there's the 3rd in those 2 notes, the thing is that the main note is still D and E and since the bass does the same, then you hear paralle octaves, that's why i said that, but also on new books, i read that thing, it makes it sound less bad, since those 2 jumping notes are part of those chords, then they can let you "pass" the mistake, so hmm on the first one it is better to avoid, on the second one, you can have them.. so.. if ihave no solutions, ill take them hehe
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