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This is pretty damn cool. I really dig the arpeggios, especially the way they hit that F# coming down. The drums are also nice, as you didn't just copy some incredibly basic 9/8 beat into every measure. The bass was a little boring, though, especially considering that it went absolutely nowhere, and the melody also could have done a lot more when it was played the second time through. . . it wasn't varied enough to keep my interest too much. Also, it seems like you aren't even done entering the keyboard part. That could also really use some spicing up, as it's doing just about nothing at the moment. Overall, though, I really like the feel of this, and if you keep it up for more sections and make this into a full piece, I think it can kick fair amounts of ass.
And by the way, this reminds me a bit of the song "Unbreakable" off Sieges Even's album The Art of Navigating by the Stars, so you might want to check them out, as they may be your style.
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