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Old Jun 15 2008, 5:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Jem7 View Post
I just want to know what do you think about this song idea?
9/8 intsrumental rock kinda ballad thing or not
If you think .... will be cool on it or .... isnt cool please tell me.
All comments, criticisms..etc welcome. Feel free and tell what do you think.
The rhythm and meter make me happy. :3

I like where it's going but it is very melodically nondescript. Thence, in the next section I suggest you come in with a pretty strong lead which is almost startling. Something that will invoke interest moreso. Otherwise, think about leading into the next section with a C# because it necessarily anticipates it.
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