Hey Seraphim,
Firstly, thanks for your review! I really appreciated that.
-The tempo it is written at was actually faster when I first heard it in my mind yeah. I think it should be acceptable, but pray, is it too fast?
-Repetition of theme in more than one key ( errr... Im not sure whether What you meant by this, would you mind elaborating? )
-Extravagant Accompaniment ( er... again, sorry but yeah, You mind elaborating? Or rather explain, for I er don't know what youre pointing towards...
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Actually, I might be inclined to say that the tempation to "cut and paste" the accompaniment and ornate just the piano right hand was too great, but I realised that It has produced a rather sloppy work. I am sorry for that, yeah.
For the Pseudo Fugue, er... I dint intend it to be a fugue, but the problem is what, erm, did you mean by pseudo? (pardon me, my english is not strong..)
Thanks alot, once again, and I do really hope you can reply to my questions!
