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Old Jun 17 2008, 10:28 PM
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Oh my gosh! I totally agree with rau...this piece is amazing I love its simplicity. In fact, the recording gives it that extra cuteness it needs.

Now: Review: Just something I noticed: Bar 13 and 14 need some correcting. On your recording, you play the semibreves (1 2 3 4)...and then the minums (1 2 3 4). These minums, I believe, should be changed to semibreves...and the following notes moved into the next bar to continue as written. The remainder SOUNDS correct; by this I mean that the stresses on the beats appear as if they have started on beat one.
That makes no sense. Uhmm, how do I explain it.
Oh ill create an example for you.

Ok...so its attached, and just see if you can understand what I mean.

Other than that, its a Gem. Well Done, and I welcome you with a hug.
Nick
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