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The Jepperson and the 16th century counterpoint benefits most if you have some guidance. If you want to get a taste of counterpoint, check some of the lessons thread.
Also, the long term solution I suggested does require at least a year of study. So don't be too overwhelmed.
As for the piece just experimenting with my two suggrestions (and some of the others suggestions) will improve greatly the piece - it really has some good ideas .
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