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I definitely agree with the above commentators, I would love to hear some variety and variation. The ideas are good, the melodies are there... Mess around with it! Musicians (composers being under that category as well) are artists of their trade. If you're an artist, you have to make something that stands out from the rest. Right now, you're on the right track, you just have to make it stand out...
Great job, and don't stop!
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