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Old Jun 20 2008, 5:00 AM
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Ok, it does not sound 'jazzy' but indeed much more like carnival music.
This is because of your three note piano left hand pattern.
I feel a lot of the feeling of the piece right now will be different if you change the left hand or start varying some of the themes.
Much less carnival-ish.

Certainly fun to listen to, especially at the tempo.
hmmmm Phew, I was kind of afraid as I thought I used too much chromatism. But Im glad it turned out unjazzy.

hmmm.... Actually, the piano left hand keeps the rhythm... I cant see anyother way to keep the rhythm, er, you might suggest one?
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