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Old Jun 20 2008, 5:34 PM
BiddyPocket BiddyPocket is offline

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Hm...I like it . It's fairly simple in terms of chord progression, but I love the overall theme and feel of the piece. I love how it dissipates near 1:09, then builds back again with a heavier/lower left hand.

great transition at 1:34.

I don't like the hesitation before some of the end cadences of the melody, it takes away from the flow a bit. Also, I thought the ending was a bit weak. I would have liked to see it end in minor.

very romantic, heartwrenching stuff . Nice job!
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