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I like this piece; you've managed to produce some very nice harmonies, while not leaving the key.
The only thing I should mention is the D flat on page 3 and 4 (Harp part), which is really C sharp, because it belongs to the relative (d) minor. Moreover you have C in the soprano part at the same time, so you are composing in two different keys simultaneously: the C belongs to F major and the C sharp (D flat in your score) belongs to D minor. This little issue completly ruins your previously built harmonic system.
Anyway, it's a very good piece, just go on!
PS. Listening to the midi the Harp sounds like the choir, possible it shares the same midi-channel with the sopranos/altos.
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