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Old Jun 24 2008, 5:24 AM
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Originally Posted by aneapolitanwouldwork View Post
Hello there,

Seconding the already mentioned, scores are extremely useful.
As the pianist, I would have expected you to write a better part for yourself than just chords and filler complementing the clarinet =]
But it is a very flowing and elegant melody. Your clarinetist should be able to pull and push that enough to make it sound very beautiful.

Why do you end it in the minor key? That kind of makes me sad. Is it the musical representation of the emmigration? It should be happy, looking back with nostalgia on all the times in the past.

And the last chord at the end. Since it is a nostalgic piece, it should trail out on the second to last tonic chord. No need to cadence with a Shosti-like bang.

Good piece! Your friend will be thrilled.

Cheers,
Brian
What i really wanted was a sad ending, so i ended the piece with a minor key.I wrote chords because piano was an accopaniment.Clarinet was the solo therefore i do not want to clash with the clarinet and i wanted him to express himself.
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