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Wow! This is amazing! And it only took you an hour? I'm more than a little jealous.
Is this the ending? If so, it seems rather abrupt (especially for the final movement of a Gloria!). Maybe a bit of rhythmic augmentation or pedal point action (or inaction, techincally i suppose) would help make it a bit more final, if you want that... Also, is the slow section starting in G? It seems a little weird to end in the subdominant of the original key...
And if it isn't your final ending, please disregard the previous paragraph. Either way, this is fantastic!
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