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The opening message of this thread said very little about this piece and what the intentions on composing it were. It helps to explain more as stated in the guidelines for posting.
The sombre mood and slow pace make me wonder if it has to do with 911, the World Trade Centre disaster - does it? If not, what aspects of New York City are you depicting?
Also, is this a piece for beginners, and for that reason the parts are kept simple?
To add to what was said above, I also thought the piece had some good moments but needs work - for example, there isn't much rhythmic variety.
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