I just finished what I have, though I'm not posting it...
I wrote it all down at the piano and then wrote it again on Rosegarden on my computer, but for some reason it wouldn't let me hear the playback, it did for about 5 notes then it just stopped.. so.. I have no real idea how it sounds... aw well, I'll just email it to my laptop and play it on there in the morning.
anyway, ima just stick to my gibberish for now, which i've named "Schazhosch" because one of the words is something like that..
And note360:
lol your shorthand from AIM.. I played Runescape and did AIM for so long with shorthand that I started writing essay's in school using 'r u 2 g2g brb' etc.. so then I vowed to never use shorthand... now I have the fastest typing in my school at 126 WPM
back on subject..
I'm like experimenting! The song is VERY repatative from the standpoint that you basically sing the same two mesures 4 times (because the words change) for each verse, and I had it originally to where verse 2 and verse 4 where the SAME, just different octaves..
SO. I experimented around and now I got verse 4 sounding SO MUCH COOLER and not repetitive AT ALL. So thanks to the guy who said experiment with stuff.
Also the drone is better, it's not straight eighth notes anymore.
The song sits at just over 4 minutes, I'm wondering if I should add one or two more verses to lengthen it out a little, but I know for sure I will be adding some soprano voices to intertwine with everything that is going on to hopefully loosen up it's repetitive-ness.
Don't get your hopes up thought for a great amazing wonderful song.. it's my first time actually trying to compose something, so.. yeah.. it'll probably be boring/bad/not what some people are expecting..