Hey JB i enjoyed listeing to this invention also
I thought that section A was far more organised, but I personally didn't like it very much - i thought the tremelos began to get quite tedious. I much preffered the idea that came in once the tremelos stopped (bar 29ish). I was a bit unsure about the tango that came in at bar 51, I wasn't so keen. I really liked the part where the chords came in being played by the right hand at bar 69 - i think it worked really well I thought the introduction of happy birthday was awesome at the end!
I think there is some work to do but a good piece so far
ferret,