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Originally Posted by Smart_A1ec
Could you give some other examples about these odd chords? measure 21 doesn't have any chords.
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Well actually all of your staffs constitute into making chords there, and anywhere else too where you've got different notes playing at the same time. For instance, what I meant was that you've got like a dotted quarter note at 21, which (going by memory now) is an A. Likewise in the bass part at the same you've got a G note going on for a while.
G and A are essentially constituting a diad in which the interval is a major second (I'm pretty sure it is, or a ninth because of the octave.... I'm just a sophomore in high school though so you will really want to ask one of the more experienced members of the forum because I'm going to probably be corrected on this post lol

)And to me that just sounds... wrong sort of, like when you push two adjacent keys on a piano and it makes that "erky twang".
It's really not that noticeable though, and you've got a great piece on your hands.
Oh, and the higher pitched part of the melody sounds... choppy sometimes ;P