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Hi. I found this to be very attractive music. In spite of your statements about fast music I found the third movement most interesting if a bit short. I understand that you are aiming for conciseness in your writing but I thought you could easily do more with this movement. My obvious move would be to add a B section and then work back to a repeat of what you already have. This seems almost to be suggested in the existing movement as you work up to a climax at the end only to stop. But of course I don't have an overview of your complete structure and your 4th movement may be a logical continuation.
My concern would be that with two adagios and a not very fast opening movement (ie the traditional moderato opening) you are giving your audience a lot of slowish music and the three minute allegro is not providing a weighty enough balance to add a bit of dramatic zing.