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Originally Posted by Antiatonality
You might just want to know, though, what doesn't work. I think your technique is great, you're obviously a professional and your work demonstrates your abilities. It may just be preference, but I thought I'd offer it up for your consideration. Simplicity, for me, is just as important as complexity. Everything feels so complex, and you lose me in the process if you don't give me something to hold onto while you take me where you want to go... if that makes any sense.
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If you can't keep up, that's more a question of your own familiarity or lack thereof with less "traditional" tonal music.
the bolded/underlined phrase above is missing one important detail:
"what doesn't work for me". Since this piece works fine for others. I'm glad you at least tried. I'm sorry you weren't able to keep up.
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"Those that know, do;
Those that understand, teach."
-Aristotle-
"toute audace engendrée par l'ignorance cesse d'être une audace et devient une maladresse"
-Debussy-
In musical criticism, when issues of craft and technical consideration are set aside, what remains is more subjective. However, until technical issues are dealt with, the subjective portion bears considerably less weight.
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