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But seriously, here's my critiques:
1. Work on your harmonic vocabulary. This peice was entirely in one key with no accidentals whatsoever. Even a few accidentals strategically placed can add a lot of character to a song.
2. Your rhythm was great... in the beginning. But once you lost that driving, complex rhythm, the song lost it's appeal for me. I'm not saying you shouldn't change your rhythmic motifs up, but make sure that the others make the song stronger.
3. Give it a big ending. This song totally needs one of those classic Beethoven endings. i-V-i never hurt anybody.
But that's just my opinion, others may disagree.
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