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Hey, this is lovely again, fascinating harmonies which are very expressive, a lot of good movement in the song fitting the lyrics. I do sort of agree with QcCowboy about the ending - I actually don't like the way the melody tries to resolve downwards onto the C, it's not very dramatic and with the harmony underneath so complex I think a little rethink of the last few bars to create a better sense of resolution - like in the other songs of this cycle - would be good. I also felt that "freeze time" maybe needed a bit more space - minims maybe? But overall, I love this, (and I've had your other three going round my head all week, haha) so thank you.
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