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I like some of the unexpected harmonic twists such as b. 8. I think you did a very good job of portraying a wasteland in this piece. Like 186-189, with that lone arpeggio circling up and down. And how it ends up in the same place as it began. It does have a very "wandering" feel to it. Very nice piece. I would have perhaps liked it to stray a bit more from the melody and accompaniment layout, and I also agree that you should check over your enharmonic spelling, and I agree about the long length. I think when pieces get this long they need to have more of a sense of where it's ultimately going, rather than "wandering around in a wasteland".
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