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The work is chaotic, but at times strangely makes some form of sense.
Have you ever heard works that are chaotic, but have a strange order, perhaps even a compelling something about them?
I supopse you made this exactly how you desired it to be made, therefore I cannot give advice, being its a kind of its own.
I don't want to call it a bad work, being I think you did what you set forth to do, and I don't want to call it great as I am bias, as I would never write in this style, because I don't care for dis-ordered works.
Anyways, part of me says good work, part of me says this is insanity.
Jeremy
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