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Personally I think the transitions worked. Some might have been a bit sudden (above all the one around 5:08), but they didn't displease my ears.
I quite like your cinematic language, but I felt you had moments where your harmony didn't exactly fit with the general mood that had been presented beforehand.
I think I hear a parallel 5th at 3:30 btw. Didn't really bother me though. I love your counterpoint in the fast section after that.
I agree with you about the ending. It lacked build up and felt too sudden.
Nevertheless it was a well crafted, enjoyable piece. Keep it up.
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