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Old Sep 1 2008, 6:27 PM
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"AN INTENSE BRASS SEXTET. YOU HAVEN'T LIVED UNTIL YOU'VE HEARD THIS."

Well golly! I just have to listen to this then!

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Yes, the ending sucks.

Your thematic material could have been any old English Folk song, easily mistakable for Scarborough Fair. And thusly, it sounded very unoriginal. The development was nice, but that theme just sounded too generic.

Your trombone goes too high too often and your tuba goes too low too often. Your trumpets are not being taken advantage of esp. in the upper register.
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