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This was rather nice.
A few notation problems - nothing major.
The parallel 5ths (implied) at about bar 50 sound a bit annoying, to my ear. I'd change them, but maybe they don't bug you there.
I would like the straight quavers motive and rhythm to change a lot more! You only have one other idea in this (which was great!) It would work better with a contrasting motive or theme, probably with larger note values.
Anyway, this was nice.
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