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Since I want people to comment on my work, I figure I should "Treat others as I would like to be treated" as the Golden Rule goes.
Anyway, I really like it and I have little bad to say about it. It may have been a little boring, but that can be addressed with some artfully placed dynamic contrasts and retardando's appropriate for this style of music. For positives, I like the triplet melody at 1:31 a lot. I love the bVI chord at 2:07, but I would have personally made a bigger deal out it by slowing down and building up to it, but maybe that's impossible with midi, idk.
Overall, good stuff! Keep at it!
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