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Old Sep 22 2008, 1:03 PM
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Thanks dark and cooper for the comments I appriciate any and all input, and I'm thankful you guys took the time to review my work here. I agree the middle section lost a little luster, I was trying to add humor in this piece

Thanks again,
Vince
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