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Good work - I especially like how you handled the additional restriction of no accidentals AND did this within a 10th. Actually though Jeppeson allows intervals up to a 12th. When you work with 3 or more voices will ocassionally exceed this for practicality.
Now, check your work again as you have two instances of parallel octaves -- recall the rule to avoid parallel P5 and P8 and the best way to do this is to avoid similar motion to these intervals. Check where you approached octaves in similar motion and correct it -- you may use the interval of the 12th if necessary.
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