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Old Sep 26 2008, 8:05 PM
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I'll comment on the rest of the movements later wayne, I'm kinda busy.


I started off with the Rondo because I was interested to see how you capped off the piece..the final movement of anything usually is the most exciting... but anyways.

I thought the movement was good overall, it's just that you like...overused the main theme (the A theme I believe) to the point that I almost zoned out towards the end. I would recommend to you to try to refrain from constantly repeating the same theme, try to diversify your compositions..with atleast somewhat contrasting A and B sections. Also, I think that it would be awesome if you can add like an accelerando around the time you repeat the main theme theme several times over and that army of 16ths in meausures 164-166, it would make it more interesting, and perhaps sound a bit more like one of those Irish Dances if you were heading in that direction. Overall though I think that this was an awesome..and fun to listen to the majority of the time, (especially considering you composed it in 25 days lol).
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