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Marius,
Great work, as usual. I enjoyed the main theme, but moreso the surrounding, uneasy music, which was more distinctive.
I think maybe the percussion was a little too heavy in the middle -- it in itself is great, but there's too much or it's too loud in the mix. In your case you don't need lots of loud percussion to cover up a lack of musicality, as in the case of someone we know. Your music is solid; let it be heard!
Very professional job on the sequencing.
The last chord / bar I think could be extended to maybe twice its length, and maybe have a timpani roll with a swell, and then have everything die off. I think it just ends slightly too soon.
Great job!
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