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I think this would work better for piano, personally. I like it though, although it's kind of hard to follow the piece. I don't quite know how to explain this, but I find Brahms hard to follow...i guess it's kinda like you introduce too many things at once? Plus it doesn't really go to the places it could. This is not to say you have no development...but I feel the texture is the same throughout and you could use some more contrast.
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