By all means Marius.
No need for further edits, didn't expect so. I mean, not everything I post here or elsewhere gets edited, on the contrary!
I listened to the 2nd version (2-3 posts above this one). I honestly didn't hear anything with the Cl. solo, so not sure there bud. Will have a relisten after I come back from shopping (meat, milk, etc, don't expect new samples).
The perc indeed might need a tiny bit pushing towards the back, just a little bit. Especially the higher pitched stuff (the tenor drum, or snare drum with snares off, whatever this is).
I'm not aware of the Crysis tracks, so if there is an effort towards that end, I have to say I'm sorry that I didn't know, and that maybe you are right... I'm judging from a purely compositions/analytical point of view!
Logic huh? I should've known that you are in Mac now! Damn me and my short mind (and long arms actually, but this is another story!

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Keep us posted (as I know you will), about this project and best of luck!