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I think this would work better for piano, personally. I like it though, although it's kind of hard to follow the piece. I don't quite know how to explain this, but I find Brahms hard to follow...i guess it's kinda like you introduce too many things at once? Plus it doesn't really go to the places it could. This is not to say you have no development...but I feel the texture is the same throughout and you could use some more contrast.
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Hmm, well, it was originally written for piano, but it sounds much nicer, at least to me, on that instrument.
This isn't music that's meant to be followed, it's supposed to pull you with it. I don't know whether it's doing its job, but as I've said above, it's not finished yet and there's a few things to work out in this.
The texture is pretty much the same throughout, although in something like this that can't really be avoided. To use Brahms as an example, there are several pieces by him which have the same texture but hundreds of different motifs, and then it'll suddenly change and sound like a completely different piece that's based solely on one motif...
Neh.
