Leon

...Wow.

Great piece you got there! I'm wowed by it. Very dramatic and beautiful. I thought the parts fit together pretty well...
It does sound phsyically impossible to play however hehe... I wrote a piece that I don't even want to try to play a little while ago...
Anyways, I thought it was a great piece. If there was any way for you to simplify it a little... (AKA Slow it down) I think it would make a great piece, if it didn't detract too much from the melody and stuff.
Do finish it though, dumbed down or no, it's a great piece!