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A nice simple poppy melody, a very simple harmony, and no texture in the piano accompanyment - Just whole notes and half notes. There's nothing wrong with this peice. On the other hand, there is nothing memorable about it.
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I agree with leightwing for the most part. I think adding more piano movement (dare I say fills?) would help
a lot. I would do some subtle melody-echoing in the piano to make it kinda sound like its in a round, but only the second time through the phrase.
I generally like the melody. The only thing I didn't like about it was it seemed a little repetitive. That's not to say that I could do a better job cause I don't think I could, but that's just the impression that
I get. Overall, not bad, but it could use some refinement.