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Well... it's very contemporary. Not quite my style, but I guess I could give you a few tips:
- You could move that entire semiquaver run up an octave and have the staccato chords in the bass.
- You could have and interlude that is occassionally played again briefly after a conclusion of a phrase or a transition from A to B (if it's in binary form)
- Have you thought about the second movement yet? Some of your ideas that you played at the end of the MIDI file might work for that movement.
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