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I thought the piece could end with the first beat of m. 239. The stuff afterwards really slowed it down for me.
Some of the harmonies (near the late middle?) sounded a little odd to me, but you may have intended that effect.
I like the interplay throughout the sextet! One thing I like is at mm. 154-158: Seeing that little repeated motif echoing through the french horn and trumpets is cool.
You use the fast 6/8 to also build intensity, which is nice.
I wish I could write like this.
Last edited by samcan : Nov 22 2008 at 12:48 PM.
Reason: Two uses of 'cool,' changing one word to 'nice.'
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