Hi Jen,
I havn't posted anything on the sight yet (lets just say i'm being a bystander for a while ...
I like your pieces. Especially on your myspace.
This prelude definitely has potential but it needs more subtle modulation if you seriously want it to proceed to an impressionistic level. You definitely create a solid foundation in terms of sound scape , its just what you7 put in which needs more refinement.
Otherwise good job for someone whose just starting out.
Cheers,
Rob.