Anyways, Could I please get someone to tell me things like whether the voicing is terriblely off in one spot or another or if the harmonies are way strange and wrong. I don't know anything about this and only go by my ear. I would really like someone like J. Lee or Derek to give me a detailed review on those voicing and harnomic things. I am not very sure that the placement of the melody and the harmony doesn't change from voice to voice every chord. I just don't know. As far as I can tell, it is pretty good, but that is just from my ear. Please help.
