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Well, if you want me to nitpick, I can say that the rhythmic notation needs to be cleaned up a lot. It was really difficult to read. Most of the time it seemed very interesting, and it played out like an etude. However, the ending was very abrupt and I wished to have heard more development. Also, I couldn't pin down a main theme, or a melody. That's why I thought it was more like an etude. It was mostly repeated harmonic patterns, but nothing to tie them all together. Consider that with any revisions you might make with this piece.
Sean Christopher Stork
Nightengale Incorporated
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Sean Christopher Stork
Nightingale Incorporated
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