Nightingale Incorporated

Well, I didn't mean that the ending was rhythmically abrupt. It was harmonically abrupt. Although, I would be much more akin to a rising motion through out the entire piece, reaching a climactic moment, and then a short and powerful ending. This one just kind of ended before it really got off the ground. Also, the rhythmic pattern of that one section towards the middle (the part that was syncopated.... or atleast counter-rhythmic) I really enjoyed, and wished you would use more of that.

You're not completely out of the woods, but due to software restraints, it's understandable. If you would like, I could transcribe this piece for you to make it a little more theoretically acurate. When you're finished with it, of course. Just to lend a helping hand.

Sean Christopher Stork
Nightengale Incorporated