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Jen i really love this piece.
It is impressionistic and defintely evokes a certain mood, almost like angels at play or something.
The key change is also a welcome response to the expository material. The counterpoint and textures you incorporate are unique and diverse. I think that instead of focusing so much on the density of the texture in the lower part you should use more flourishes/florid rhythms and textures in the upper part towards the middle of the piece. You stray from the main theme a bit which while its not bad, it could use a bit of fine polish.
Otherwise I have to say that out of all the pieces i've heard this is really fantastic.
Well done!
Cheers,
Rob.
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