WHOO HOO!
There's some stuff I know how to work with.
- More syncapated rhythm, I agree, I think I'll go back and see if I can add more of that
- Harmonically abrupt, I think I understad what you mean, when played on the piano, the last chord is supposed to roll (I know there is a better word

) but I'll see if I can't do more there, I'm going to play with that a bit and see what I like
So then, would you guys recomend I call this an etude? I'm terrible with names of pieces based on form and structure and whatever else. I couldn't tell you the difference between a sonatina and a sonata lol
