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Ok, so I like this piece much better with your added material and extra effects. The ending however is simply not doing it for me. It's very pretty and effective in it's own right, but you have such beautiful melodic things going on in the beginning, and I just want to hear it in the end, too. It's very accompanimental, and sounds like there's something missing. It would be really cool to layer a melodic line on top in parallel octaves or something. I don't know what it needs, but I'm just suggesting not to close the lid on this one yet. It's come extremely far from the first time I heard it, and you should be proud of yourself!
Sean Christopher Stork
Nightengale Incorporated
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Sean Christopher Stork
Nightingale Incorporated
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