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Oh, it's SO relaxing. lovely because of its simplicity. Can't you develop it to at least twice the length?
My single comment is that the drum loop is unvarying from beginning to end. A little change here and there might be nice.
But you can compose something like this and not compose a title....wha-a-a-at???.
Call it "Opus 1" or "Dream Softly" or "Summer Eve" or pick a few random words from somewhere based on the numbers of your birthdate.
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